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Lariana podpija jak nikt nie widzi
Joined: 16 Jan 2009 Posts: 16
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Posted: Fri Jan 16, 2009 9:10 pm Post subject: mój wiersz ^^ |
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Przetrwanie
Chociaż nie znam tajników życia,
nie wiem co znaczy żyć.
Jednak idę bezkresną doliną,
by tam marzyć i śnić.
Obraz nędzy i głodu nie jest mi obcy.
Znam rozpacz, tęsknotę, żal nieosiągalny.
Dalej brnę po okruchach nocy.
Nie straszne mi burze, pioruny okrutne.
Złe słowa , raniły do głębi.
Wobec nieskończoności naszych istnień.
To tylko sople lodu na malutkiej rynnie.
Wiem,że chłód można pokochać,
gdy posiadasz odpowiedni pancerz.
Ciepły, ze słów ,z ust Boga. |
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Alchemik swój człek

Joined: 06 Sep 2006 Posts: 363 Location: Valinor/Bochnia
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Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 5:05 pm Post subject: |
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Masz talent Czekamy na więcej! ) _________________ Żyj tak by gdy odejdziesz innym było nudno bez ciebie. |
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Lariana podpija jak nikt nie widzi
Joined: 16 Jan 2009 Posts: 16
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Posted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 3:48 pm Post subject: |
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Dziękuje *skromny*..
Postaram się poszperać w zeszycie i przepisać jakieś.. |
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kyus swój człek
Joined: 15 Feb 2007 Posts: 516 Location: Stalowa Wola
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Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 3:19 pm Post subject: |
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Dobry, chociaz wielu nie zna zycia od brzydkiej strony  _________________ www.ebooks.one.pl |
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Lariana podpija jak nikt nie widzi
Joined: 16 Jan 2009 Posts: 16
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Posted: Sun Feb 01, 2009 9:38 pm Post subject: |
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A tu trochę zmienny nastrój .Miałam dola jak widać ,jak to pisałam..
[5.01.2009r.]
Jakże ciężko jest nic nie czuć,
nie spalac się ,nie tęsknić ,nie umierać poczwórnie.
Jak wspaniale czuć uścisk dłoni, blask ,błysk, spokój.
Dusić się w sobie ,palpitacje serca.
Chwilowa radość, euforia.
Wieczny strach,
Nieokiełznana siła, popychająca ku bezdrożom.
Pielęgnująca odciski, splugane ręce brudem.
Posypują się wiórka, niczym kamienie.
Lekkie jest ciężkie.. |
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Atyde Site Admin

Joined: 07 Sep 2006 Posts: 1868 Location: Oława
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Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 6:32 pm Post subject: |
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Potrafisz zamyślić. Gratulacje - masz talent. _________________ Jeżeli TU nie odnajdziemy szczęścia,
nie odnajdziemy go nigdzie.
Jeżeli TERAZ nie odnajdziemy szczęścia,
nie odnajdziemy go nigdy.
Tu gdzie jestes,
teraz, gdy o tym myślisz;
jest czas na miłość. Jak nigdy. |
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Jacey pierwszy łyk
Joined: 22 Jan 2010 Posts: 4
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Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 10:17 am Post subject: |
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Going Home
I first heard this story a few years ago from a girl I had met in New York's Greenwich Village. Probably the story is one of those mysterious bits of folklore that reappear every few years, to be told a new in one form or another. However, I still like to think that it really did happen, somewhere, sometime.(wow power leveling,)
They were going to Fort Lauderdalethree boys and three girls and when they boarded the bus, they were carrying sandwiches and wine in paper bags, dreaming of golden beaches as the gray cold of New York vanished behind them.
As the bus passed through New Jersey, they began to notice Vingo. He sat in front of them, dressed in a plain, ill-fitting suit, never moving, his dusty face masking his age. He kept chewing the inside of his lip a lot, frozen into some personal cocoon of silence.
Deep into the night, outside Washington, the bus pulled into Howard Johnson's, and everybody got off except Vingo. He sat rooted in his seat, and the young people began to wonder about him, trying to imagine his life: perhaps he was a sea captain, a runaway from his wife, an old soldier going home. When they went back to the bus, one of the girls sat beside him and introduced herself. Sro Gold
“We're going to Florida,” she said brightly.“ I hear it's really beautiful.”
“It is, ” he said quietly, as if remembering something he had tried to forget.
“Want some wine?” she said. He smiled and took a swig. He thanked her and retreated again into his silence. After a while, she went back to the others, and Vingo nodded in sleep.
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In the morning, they awoke outside another Howard Johnson's,and this time Vingo went in. The girl insisted that he join them. He seemed very shy, and ordered black coffee and smoked nervously as the young people chattered about sleeping on beaches. When they returned to the bus, the girl sat with Vingo again, and after a while, slowly and painfully, he told his story. He had been in jail in New York for the past four years, and now he was going home.
“Are you married?” World of Warcraft power leveling
“I don't know.”
“You don't know?” she said.
“Well, when I was in jail I wrote to my wife,” he said. “ I told her that I was going to be away a long time, and that if she couldn't stand it, if the kids kept asking questions, if it hurt too much, well, she could just forget me, I'd understand. Get a new guy, I saidshe‘s a wonderful woman,really somethingand forget about me. I told her she didn't have to write me for nothing. And she didn‘t. Not for three and a half years.”
“And you're going home now, not knowing?”
“Yeah,” he said shyly. “ Well, last week, when I was sure the parole was coming through, I wrote her again. We used to live in Brunswick, just before Jacksonville, and there's a big oak tree just as you come into town. I told her that if she'd take me back, she should put a yellow handkerchief on the tree, and I'd get off and come home. If she didn't want me, forget itno handkerchief, and I'd go on through.”
“Wow,” the girl exclaimed. “Wow.” world of warcraft power leveling
She told the others, and soon all of them were in it, caught up in the approach of Brunswick, looking at the pictures Vingo showed them of his wife and three children. The woman was handsome in a plain way, the children still unformed in the much-handled snapshots.
Now they were 20 miles from Brunswick, and the young people took over window seats on the right side, waiting for the approach of the great oak tree. The bus acquired a dark, hushed mood, full of the silence of absence and lost years. Vingo stopped looking, tightening his face into the ex-con's mask, as if fortifying himself against still another disappointment.
Then Brunswick was ten miles, and then five. Then,suddenly, all of the young people were up out of their seats, screaming and shouting and crying, doing small dances of joy. All except Vingo. wow power level
Vingo sat there stunned, looking at the oak tree. It was covered with yellow handkerchiefs20 of them, 30 of them, maybe hundreds, a tree that stood like a banner of welcome billowing in the wind. As the young people shouted, the old con rose and made his way to the front of the bus to go home. |
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TIGRA podpija jak nikt nie widzi
Joined: 12 Feb 2010 Posts: 27 Location: Gdynia
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Posted: Fri Feb 12, 2010 10:54 pm Post subject: ZMYSŁY |
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Wiem że jesteś blisko.
Czuję Twoją obecność...
Wchodzę do pokoju.
Stoisz w ciszy. Patrzysz nieobecnym wzrokiem przez okno.
Podchodzę bliżej Ciebie.
Jesteś taki niedostępny…tak blisko a jednak tak daleko…
Świat zamiera w bezruchu.
Czuję ogromne napięcie...
Żelazna obręcz strachu i podniecenia zaciska się na mnie.
Serce uderza coraz szybciej.
Wyciągam dłoń w Twoim kierunku, ale nie dotykam.
W powietrzu obrysowuję kształt barków, ramion, pleców…
Zbliżam twarz do Twej szyi. Pod skórą tętni życie.
Tak pięknie pachniesz…
Moje usta delikatnie dotykają Twojej skóry.
Słyszysz jak niespokojnie oddycham.
Odwracasz się i patrzysz w moje oczy.
Czytasz we mnie jak w otwartej księdze.
Twój wzrok się zmienia. Uśmiechasz się zadziornie.
Obejmujesz mnie delikatnie, ale zdecydowanie.
W Twoich ramionach czuję się tak bezpieczna…
Zamykam oczy, chłonę tę chwilę w ciszy… _________________ www.tigra-gdynia.bloog.pl
Zdanie jednostki -
jest dla niej całym światem.
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kyus swój człek
Joined: 15 Feb 2007 Posts: 516 Location: Stalowa Wola
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Posted: Thu Feb 18, 2010 5:41 pm Post subject: |
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Mily wiersz Az wspomienia wracaja x) _________________ www.ebooks.one.pl |
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TIGRA podpija jak nikt nie widzi
Joined: 12 Feb 2010 Posts: 27 Location: Gdynia
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Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 6:59 pm Post subject: nidomówienia... |
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to co nie wypowiedziane do końca
bywa bardziej wymowne
niż to co przedstawione wprost... _________________ www.tigra-gdynia.bloog.pl
Zdanie jednostki -
jest dla niej całym światem. |
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Sasha pierwszy łyk
Joined: 14 Apr 2010 Posts: 2
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 7:57 pm Post subject: |
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| Podoba mi się. Czekam na inne. |
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